This week blog has been OK because I did not get alot of my peers reviewed back on my paragraph but one comment. But it was very helpful for that one comment that I got back. Also about the paramedic method has been so helpful because helps you to see if you have too many words in one sentence that you really do not need the words you can take it out and it still sounds good. I do not know if I'm explaining it right but this is how I see it when using the paramedic method. It helps me a lot with my paper. I did not understand it at first but once I started reading over the information it made since to me. But to be honest I really think that I'm going to continue to keep using blog because I can get alot of information off on my mind and what I'm thinking about my classes. So this has been so wonderful using for the last couple of weeks.
Thanks
Marie Spruill
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Marie,
ReplyDeleteI agree with you about the paramedic method. At first, I was somewhat confused, but as I kept reading, I started to understand the paramedic method a lot better. I also understood it the way you explained it, taking words out to make a sentence not seem so wordy.
I'm not sure if I'll continue to use this blog after this course because I have a facebook account and I spend most of my free time on that. I love chatting with my friends from high school that I have not seen in years.
Alicia Steele Little